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Write Plainly
Habakkuk 2:2 says "Write the vision:
and make it plain upon tablets."
Even though assignments come with length requirements, it
is important to write as plainly and succinctly as possible.
More is not necessarily better.
How can you write "plainly"?
- Either use the one word form or omit the following phrases
- for the purpose of-use to
- in the near future-say soon
- due to the fact that-write because
- owing to the fact-use since
- at this point in time-say now
- with regard to-write about
- Avoid there is, there are, and it is
There is, there are, and it is
add unnecessary words to a sentence and take the emphasis
away from the subject.
Compare:
"There are many students at the seminary who believe
that their flowery words are as good as Solomon's
and
"Many students at the seminary believe that their flowery
language is good as Soloman's."
The word students is the subject of the sentence
and, consequently, should be an important element, not buried
in the middle of the sentence. The words there are
don't add any information to the sentence.
- Omit needless words
The sentence "There is certainly no way anyone can
deny it: people who are male go about thinking in different
ways from the ways people who are females think,"
could be shortened to
" Men and women think differently" (a savings
of 82%!).
Longer is not better; it's just longer and often just verbose.
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